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No! Writing about female dogs in a super confusing way is great! I've done it before with a poem called Penelope... it makes me sound like a lesbian. XD But ...

Yes! That is the whole point of writing. Expand your boundaries. :)

For Daddy, by Ari [awwwwwwwwww...] Snowbirds, by yoha_ahoy [jumps around with a bird book in hand]

Everyone, give a big aw on the count of three. One... Two... THREE! AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW... With that said, a charming poem! I love the plaid shirts line. :) Daddies are so ...

Now the last line seems too wordy. But at least the other lines seem to be a little more "with" the poem. Oh, don't you love poetry? ;)

Yay! I love poetry about birds. It's just one of my favorite topics ever. :) And I love your use of colors! It's like... you tapped into two of my ...

Ooo! I do like this. It's strange, simple, yet surprisingly (even with all that French) readable. And it draws a picture. A picture of a frosty night, with blues and ...

First the worst, second the best! ;)

^ I'm in Hell

That's kind of funny that you thought that the last line was forced (it's good to know that it sounded like that), but that actually was the easiest stanza to ...

:) YAY! I'm on Chapter 10 of my story FREAK. And... that chapter sucks, lol! Oh well... editing is good.

If you're having trouble with writing critiques, then I have tutored some members on it, and I would be more than happy to help. I've also written this thread: It ...

Somebody handed me a hat that looked like a moose. Oooookay?

OMG! WHO VOTED NO?????????? *stabs randomly*

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