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LOL! Alex, it's better than the few of us who have absolutely no lives and get our kicks from how many pages for a critique we can come up with. ...

"Because I that is where I do live. " I think this sentence is a little screwy. Otherwise, interesting! A nice little thing about a place where you live (or ...

YAY! Just remember... 2.5 percent of those posts are mine. :)

Chapter 1: The Boatman The bay was only visible through a fracture of light that escaped through the billowing purple clouds, its black waters clasped the stony beach and pulled ...

I like the title. It's original and kind of fun. Just delete the (Working Title) part after it. The story also looks rather original. ...would I scare you if I ...

That's a very broad topic... What do you want to find out about?

Earth in Balance, by Al Gore ---> Ugh... never ever ever read it. Interstellar Pig ---> One of the stupidest books in all existance. The Amber Spyglass ---> It has ...

anyway now thanks to you i will have to wait until the end of the year for BOTH of his stories, i was only here to read his stories, so ...

If you find a story or poem where you are tempted to use vulgar language, stop. Ask yourself, "What am I trying to say? Will this help the writer?" Most ...

Read this. And for goodness's sake... don't think you're alone. I've written worse things than this. By asking for a critique, especially from smaur and I, you're asking to have ...

I always wanted to publish my first novel when I was 16. I hope you're more successful than I! :D Welcome to YWS! Make yourself at home... here's a doughnut. ...

Just because there aren't many replies doesn't mean we don't read it. ;) It sounds cool. Writing activities, I though, were different than just word play.

I say that vampires shouldn't be really vampires. I think, instead, they are a fanatical religious group which is involved in canabalism and other unseemingly activities. So they're humans, and ...

Classical for me...and then maybe country. I really dislike is a brain deadener Brain deadeners are needed when you're doing math homework though! ;)

hehe. I was waiting for this. In fact it was the main reason I moved the story to this Forum, because I know you tend to read more story's here ...