Snoink

Bah! English spelling stinks! There is no 'u' anywhere in color. But I'm with the grey caucus on this issue. Not sure why, but gray just does not look right. ...

This is a very pretty poem that makes me realize how cold it really is now... *watches snow falling* Now I know why Jennafina kept on recommending you to me, ...

I like the first stanza best, precisely because it was so disconnected. But halfway through, me, being the imbecile I am, lost track of the thoughts as the thoughts became ...

I'm trying to study Emily Dickinson... be afraid. Sooo... I'm sure I'll get more questions as I continue my research, but my first question: When we see a hyphen, how ...

Hello! :) First off: you have one of the CUTEST avvies ever. I mean... what's not to love? *huggles the big little doggie* Anyway, I'm known as Snoink. I come ...

It reminds me of going to church. My church loves tormenting its congregation. :roll: No, but I did like it. It was just like going to church... without having to ...

This part is begging to be a prologue: The bay was only visible through a fracture of light that escaped through the billowing purple clouds, its black waters clasped the ...

I don't know. I read a lot of British work, so I am a very confused American...

This has been driving me crazy lately. The words "gray" and "grey" are both acceptable... but which one is preferred? Which one do you like better?

I said when you find a story or poem. ;) That's when you're commenting. Writing it is a completely different story.

Peridot is a gem that is light green, by the way. Hmm... closer but not there yet. And I like the adjectives... just not the order. Should I split up ...

... oh dear, I hope vulgar language is allowed for blogs. Or at least controversial stuff... :?

Help me people! I don't know if this sentence is awkward or not, and it's driving me crazy! What's wrong with it??????????? "Small peridot butterflies were woven in her blonde ...

I do like your writing. You have a very elegant style that lends itself well to poetry and storytelling. This poem has a subject that I have frequently thought about, ...

Yeah, I have to agree with Sarah. The titles given to every couple of paragraphs seemed to break up the flow... something you don't want. You have a really nice ...