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Would you kill someone if someone asked you to? This is the question that a guy named Milgram tried to figure out. After the trials of World War 2, he ...

Haha. I love taking showers, and my parents always complain that their showers are icy because of mine. Sometimes they shut off the water and stuff which makes it REALLY ...

It goes on kind of long, but it does offer some interesting images, my favorite being the square tiles. I think you're trying to symbolize a coldness... after all, tile ...

Guns beard? I have to comment on this sentence: "Its realy cheesy i know , but just imagine it was real and not fake." As a writer, you are supposed ...

It was cold and dripping. Very wet actually. "When are we going to get the new water heater?" I called out, shivering. It would figure that our house was not ...

Well... okay, I suppose I didn't like the POV. It was like, do we have to know every stinking comment that goes in his mind??? I mean, if you did ...

XD Oh come on... What you have to do with those kind of characters is the SLAM DOWN! method. That's what you do with the character, not make him an ...

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! If Roman has a wife, then that means that he CAN'T be hot and handsome and that means that he probably CAN'T have a hot and sweaty scene with ...

It wasn't that long... :P First of all, I liked it. It had a really poetic style which I liked (imagine that!) so I won't ask you to shorten your ...

Read it and proofread it, please. There are tons of spelling and grammatical errors. Since I've read some of your other work, I won't go on and on about the ...

It is very powerful. Slightly disturbing too -- it feels like you're yelling at me. Which is a rare feeling for me to get when I read anything. The raw ...

Wow.... this was awesome. I like how it reminds me of lounge singers. You've captured the feeling very well, I think. :D

What the...? Why did spellcheck say it was right? What the hell was I spelling? *grumbles about how stupid Word is* Er... Jiggy, can you explain your complaint about those ...

Roman stroked his chestnut hair back and looked back at his watch. Ten minutes till two. More precisely, ten minutes till two in the middle of the night. Or was ...

I don't think this thread was meant for arguing... if you don't like it, you don't have to go there. End of story. And if it is about sex and ...