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Heehee... I think the "lesson" the narrator gave the boy was a little long-winded and everything, but I especially liked the first part of the poem. As I've said before ...

It's not bad. The metering is sometimes off. That is, certain words don't seem to fit in right. For example: Sitting in a dark corner, Unable to move, The nightmare ...

My dog can swim... Besides, I know how to save a human better than a dog. All three of us would probably drown since I couldn't maneuver very well in ...

We already HAVE done it. Modern chemistry is indeed amazing. Turning Lead into Gold From Anne Marie Helmenstine, Ph.D., Is Alchemy Real? Before Chemistry was a science, there was Alchemy. ...

Okay, first of all, I want to compliment you. By using the spellchecker, it made this story THAT much better. Instead of getting held up by fighting with grammar and ...

Second person shouldn't be used for most fiction purposes, unless you have a really good reason. I use second person in my critiques to create a more personal touch, but ...

HAHA! Er... sorry. You got away with it in the beginning, because it felt more like a prologue. But guess what, Missy? It ain't working now. What you're doing is ...

...spew also works, lol. And yeah, vomit sounds very stiff. Maybe in formal stories? I find that talking about bodily functions usually hurts the story more than it helps. :?

I guess the idea of mutations makes since because of your religeon also. And they do, his powers are that he got injected with the blood of both Oprah and ...

Don't be so cynical. ;) Every poem is different, but another one you make can be just as good.

That was seriously weird though. When I was calculating the points, I did Dusky's first, and I was like, "Holy cow, she got 8000+!" And then when I calculated yours, ...

I have my own interesting signs. I was born in the year of the dragon, my sign is a Gemini. To top it of, I turn 18 on 06/06/06, or ...

Oh. My. God. First reaction: TI-89? Did Dono convert from the dark side? *clicks link* Second reaction: Oh, my brother did a poem about... a calculator? Third reaction: Wow... this ...

I was actually a very creative kid when I was little. I would run around my backyard with my dolls or little toy pigs and then play in the gardens ...

We studied the Milgram experiment. There are some problems with it - sample/validity etc. - but the conclusions are fairly damning. You have to look at it in wider context ...