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The first stanza is a little strange. I would seperate out the people or give them more descriptions. Also, I would rather see the line "gossamer steel dreams" because it ...

On topic, please... :roll: By the way, no, this should not be a YWS comic. If it's rated R, that should tell you it's not suitable for the 13 and ...

Little did SA and Grif know, it wasn't SMAW who was doing the kidnapping, but rather SPEW... Silent Aviator said as he rose up. Unless you're Jesus, you don't rose ...

First of all, our styles are completely different, and I don't want to say, "This is what I would do if I were you" because I'm not you. I do ...

Shel Silverstein If any writer got me to start reading poetry, it was him. I mean, he has these fun lines and everything that don't necessarily rhyme, but are awesome ...

She's been very active in the poetry forums, critiquing with a bunch of depth on many poems, telling us why she liked it, etc. She has gained at least 1000 ...

Do you use the word "huevos" on purpose? Because it makes the poem slightly homosexual since "huevos" is what is used for "testicles" in the Mexican world. :? But still... ...

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG! OMG! OMG! *totally freaks out* I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! That is, differentiation is kind of pain, really, but where it really gets interesting is integration, which is so FRIGGIN' ...

Would the people in this organization be elves or humans? And don't shut your mind completely in school. Continue on to college and stuff. High school sucks, yes, but college ...

It's kind of hard to say out loud because it's a rather awkward name. How would you pronounce it?

When you're first coming up with an idea, don't worry about whether it is clichéd or not. Write what you want. It doesn't have to be publishable for you to ...

It's not depressing. She isn't a depressed girl -- just someone with a lot of energy to spare and without an outlet to do so. Now, if you're talking about ...

Ha! I looked at the 800 page masterpiece I've been working on for about four years now, and guess what? We got 28 clichés! Oh man, we so totally rock!

Saw this in Dusky's blog... had to post it. XD How much does your fantasy story follow this?

You were always such a pretty poet. :) I think this is one of your best.