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Hehe! Okay, in the original report, there was this photo of me smiling at the camera, and you can see my back. I pull my hair in a ponytail straight ...

At a joke shop!

I like the lighter ones... it's easier to critique with a light screen, for me anyways.

No idea.

I know! One of the prettiest vowel sounds ever is the "ah" sound. We just like it, instinctively. If you look through some of the Latin languages, you'll notice lots ...

Not "ok".... It should be "okay." And repeating may and does sell, but don't be a sell out. Write what comes to the heart. :)

Please... her poetry? Allah is far prettier to say than God or Jesus, so the constant repetition is actually nice -- rather rare, actually.

Nicely done! It reminded me of short stories I would read in magazines and books -- ALWAYS a good thing. I liked the voice of the character, I liked the ...

Don't think about it too hard... I can safely say that this is one of the most incoherent stories ever. In fact, I can't make any sense of it at ...

Oh, it should be "BESTTEST" by the way....

LOL! Dusky, that's friggin' awesome.

Working a difficult math problem. I mean really... anyone can vomit up their emotions on paper. That's not creativity. Besides, the idea has already been done a bazillion times before, ...

Gentlemen, this is getting kind of nasty. We all have very strong feelings about this -- after all, it is a young writers' society. Critiques are what we were founded ...

The story induces a very powerful emotion. It makes me want to scream and cry and rip my eyeballs out. Good luck...

Also, you don't have to teach people every little bit of writing like they're in first grade. If they don't understand, go ahead and explain, but if they do understand ...