Snoink

You should have a poll here... No, seriously, one reason why we critique is because we want to go beyond the usual questions of, "Is this good or bad?" No. ...

Begging helps! Or embarrassing Snoinky into seeing it again. ;) Anyway, the story is "AWWWWWWWWWWWW"-ish. If you know what I mean. Nice short little thingy. "Mark, your gonna make me ...

*blinks back sleep* I *hate* Daylights Savings Time! *grumbles*

Grammar check for the first paragraph! Her arms were crossed and the red satin gown she was in wrinkled. I would prefer: "Her arms were crossed and her red satin ...

She wanted to take her diary, change the plot around and sell it. So, while she was writing it, she didn't think, "Oh, I'm going to publish this diary." She ...

Psychopaths are fun (in a strange way) to write for, but before you even THINK of using a psychopath character, please, for the love of all that is oinking, research ...

My thoughts exactly. *yawns* So... it looks like you three are going to be an interesting group. ;)

I worry about that 47%... O_o

...maybe. ;)

Hehe! I knew you would post some of your writing today. :) Pretty good. You cited your sources (always a good thing) and put it in a clear, concise matter. ...

Well... we love grammar! :D ...and I wouldn't trust Mr. Waffles on any opinions of this member known as "Snoink." He's probably wrong. ;)

Hehehe... I know younger sisters are often better than their sisters anyway. *glares at younger sister* She beat me in a writing contest, LOL! Oh well, we still love them ...

Interesting metaphor there. XD ...or is it a simile? I could never remember...

I must admit, the title is very catchy. In fact, as soon as I saw the title, I wrote a poem with the same title, just because the title is ...

@ Bobo: There are actually quite a few parents like that. It's scary. @ Rivergirl: A debate about linguistics! XD I have to agree with you there. Smart means a ...