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Re: writing expirement for those who never end
AHHH!!! Beginning stories are a pain. Ending them is a pain in the rear. I'll get to the middle of a story, forget about it, delete it and start something ...
Apr 9, 2006 -
Re: Mortal Peril from Within the Mind-A Psychological State
Look to ancient mythology. For example, there were many dark myths about prophecies. Some of these prophecies would be absolutely horrible. For example, one guy was told that he would ...
Apr 9, 2006 -
Re: Where Lies the Ocean
For the first chapter, (I think it's a chapter) the writing dances . Which, between you and me, is a very good thing because it makes it that much more ...
Apr 9, 2006 -
Re: "Writing Challenge 4/03" Wind Spirits
Iris is sitting there, waiting. Waiting for the skies to burst relentlessly upon her, to drown her, waiting for the wind spirits to engulf her, take her along with them. ...
Apr 9, 2006 -
Re: Let us be free!
Haha, very catchy too! :D Just one nitpick: "We can drug the wine to lull them to a deep dreamless sleep" I would rather see them broken apart like: "We ...
Apr 8, 2006 -
Re: THE BESTEST STORY EVVAR!!!!!!
This totally deserves to be the featured work... :roll:
Apr 8, 2006 -
Re: Hello...
Hello Valerie! Welcome to YWS. You're going to love this place if you love writing. :D
Apr 7, 2006 -
Re: Which template do you like?
Actually, now that I think of it, I turned down my screen rather low so I would be able to spend friggin' long hours on YWS. Hehehe... What you might ...
Apr 7, 2006 -
Re: What Would You Like To See Added?
Okay, I've been thinking a little bit more, and I think the profile page needs to be tweaked. My understanding in PHP is limited, so I'm not sure how you ...
Apr 7, 2006 -
Re: In Defense of Harry Potter
Oh, this is a nice essay. It was, in every respect, delightful to read. The research you did sounded quite thorough and the points you brought up were well thought ...
Apr 7, 2006 -
Re: Geography and Your World
Wow... I've never really thought about it. :shock: I should start using it! :lol: I suppose I would use it to create conflict. For instance, if I were doing a ...
Apr 7, 2006 -
Re: What Would You Like To See Added?
No music on blogs... please. Different smilies might be nice too! I mean, I love these guys (:):P:D:(), but only to a certain extent. Ooh! And a piggy smilie! Because ...
Apr 6, 2006 -
Re: Macbeth in Minutes
Totally sweet, man! :D
Apr 6, 2006 -
Re: one step
He wanted to kill her, she was sure of it. She wiped her face hesitantly and then walked quickly to store. She wanted to talk with her friend...
Apr 6, 2006 -
Re: Is this too much like Harry Potter
First of all, why are you writing this? Think about it. If you're writing this solely to become a best seller, then you probably should stop. First of all, J.K. ...
Apr 6, 2006