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Different words are feminine and masculine. Okay. So how do you describe a man who cries/weeps/sobs in a masculine way? Apparently with difficulty. How would you describe a man who ...

Wow! A playwright! That's pretty nifty. Usually, playwrights are excellent poets too because they are awesome at word choice... you have to be when writing dialogue! Anyway, great to have ...

Hmm. Doesn't do much as a character sketch, since we don't see anything really unique about these characters. Pretty stereotypical of dramatic personages. Horny guys. Hard-to-get women, struggling fro

I just want to tell you that this article is flippin' sweet and an excellent tool (for me, as a critiquer) to use when I'm critiquing a story. It really ...

Oops! XD No, I mean the buddy list we had.

This is in Chapter 13. So you get to meet Carolina before. And it's not the same day as Chapter 6... gah. That was a bad day for all the ...

What about the friends we already have? :?

I love it when people go through my numerous sentence structure mistakes... it's just awesome. My sister is my harshest critic (or second harshest, actually) and goose pimples run down ...

*twitches* Oh, come on! I mean... I either have to novelize this or abandon it. And I prefer the former. It's part of a larger story called "FREAK." *runs away ...

Okay, a member thought it would be totally awesome to have a discussion about this, and I agreed! What makes Shakespeare totally flippin' sweet and so enduring? Discuss! :D

Not bad, not bad. It reminds me of some of the psalms. After all, it has lots of repetition. And repetition ain't necessarily bad. ;) Just remember: rhyming is not ...

I thought it was really cute and sweet, etc. I also liked your mention of the swan. I don't know about you, but swans are totally awesome and very romantic. ...

It has a perfect and complex rhythm, which is rare and quite a pleasure, but besides that it confused me and didn't touch me at all. Although I got the ...

I agree, it is a little bit bold, but I love Spirited Away, so I gobbled up every word. Mr Brice does sound American with his use of "ya'll" and ...

Just to reinterate, in case you forget and get stuck... You don't think he would rape her, which is fine, but you need to give more reasons why he wouldn't ...