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Hmmm... First of all, the rhyming sounds a little forced. Sometimes this works, especially if you are dealing with an ironic poem that uses a child's voice to complain over ...

Wow... I just realized how much I missed your poetry. XD My favorite stanza was this: In silence, you bite your nails and wait so pathetically; I used to think ...

Hehehe... But I must admit, I did like the first two stanzas quite a bit. They were insulting, but in an extremely entertaining way for me, the outsider. :D

xanthan is quite right, those lines are quite forced. The first thing I look at when I see it doesn't quite flow is the syllable count I tilted my head ...

Ergh! Whenever I read your work, I get jealous. :D 50 days of your love Before this line, you talk about Jesus. Because of this, I think you ought to ...

I once wrote a comedy/fantasy, and it was fun. :) Dusky's right... the easiest ways to combine comedy into fantasy is to make fun of fantasy clichés. Look at fantasies ...

You are quite right. This was definitely made for the stage. And fortunately for me, I can somewhat picture it in my mind! First of all, I will say this: ...

XD I so totally want to buy some now... I can hear the announcer in my head.

Yay! Debating! :D Acting is extremely close to writing. For instance, when I'm doing dialogue or character sketches (which include a lot of dialogue) I'll be acting out the story. ...

XD Sometimes I forget I'm not on TYWC. I was showing some of my work to someone there, and as soon as she read the fifth chapter of FREAK, she ...

HOORAY! Does this mean I can have comments on my friends thingy? :D

XD Okay then, Dan Quayle and Al Gore are hilarious. :) I love the NASA one! And that one you posted Nate... omg. I would HATE to critique his speeches. ...

"Style" is a naughty word. "Style" is for historians to decide once they get ahold of your work. Just write. Your first and most important goal is just to write. ...

One time, I emailed a chapter of my story, FREAK to another writer. She looked at it, and this was her response: "It was a good boring chapter." Boring??? I ...

*sighs* Grammar is so beautiful... :lots_hearts: