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Hahaha... before I even read a critique, I stare at the computer screen, tell myself I can't write and that these people are just trying to help me, and then ...

Hehehe! YES. Story polls should be banned. Why? Because usually they're just a sad pathetic thing like, "Do you hate my story?" and there's only two options and it's just ...

Darn it, why is everyone picking on me in this thread? XD But yeah. You HAVE to support your dialogue with description in some form or another. It's really hard ...

Actually, at the moment, I like our pencil over sword thingy. :D

The friends things was nice, because then it was easier to PM people, but... um... after getting fifty bazillion friends, it became kind of a hassle. XD

I have to say: the layout is completely sexy. :D

Better idea! Three cheers... to me! ...no, just kidding. :) I should get grounded more often. Things like this might happen more! :D

Hehehe! I should start running away screaming, no? :) Look forward to reading your essays! :D

Hehehe! Okay, for all those who don't know, I've been writing this novel called FREAK about five years. Obsessed? Nah... In any case, it deals with societal issues. What can ...

Er... not really. He's kind of getting oldish.

Hahaha... you mean Sadie's father and Sadie? :roll:

Haha... there are four types of stories. Man against man, man against society, man against nature, and man against himself. There are no variations. Your story may have bits and ...

When I didn't use the right password, I got a 404 error. Perhaps there's a page missing? EDIT: Also, I edited this post on one of the writing tips forums, ...

Nate wrote it here. So yeah, it's for real.

Well... if you need something to fix, maybe this line? "But to you others dare not to do the same." But seriously... this is good stuff. It has a bouncy ...