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Hehe, that wasn't that bad. Try varying the perspective for additional fun. I want to know what the Empress of all is thinking when she's doing that. ;)

Gah! There's only going to be ten of these? *whimpers*

Not necessarily. Just like a gentle nudge that, hey, this isn't the soppiest story alive. And a touch of really light sarcasm seems to do the trick.

So basically? This is emotionless. XD

Sometimes, in the heat of the moment, you can write these horribly awful soppy scenes. Now, if you're lucky, then it's just narrative and you can cut it out and ...

Ugh. There are instances where it does work, but it usually sucks. Like... for one of the stories that it does work in, there's 700 billion that it doesn't work ...

Er... this is a strange one. I can get to the moderators' policy debate forum. Not to the actual moderators' forum... that doesn't exist for me. But still. I'm not ...

Oh, yes! Publishing would be totally sweet. Slightly unrealistic, but still. Sweet. I'm working on a novel right now and I'm about 75 K words into, which is very encouraging. ...

Hehe! I would so totally be the pig. :D Er... yeah. I think, for this case, third person would be better. With first person, you can go into how everything ...

The rest of you know what sections your in charge of. Should be this: The rest of you know what sections you're in charge of. "Who the heck are the ...

Nani. I think... It has a gnaw sound to it anyway. So it should sound like Non-nee.

Yes. It was cold. - the freak Let's not talk about it though. - Sadie My characters are SOOOOO messed up. Have you ever looked up and got lost in ...

...haha... I think I shall have to spork out his other eye.

As you spill your soul out in toilets, Over groins and dinner tables and wherever Else the lusting lightening flashes for you. This part is kind of weird... either that, ...