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  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game

    Whiskey. - the freak Who do you love the most?

    Aug 14, 2006
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game

    My big mouth. I talk too much for my own good. - Daniel Who was your best teacher?

    Aug 14, 2006
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game

    Sadie named me, I think. And Daniel calls me angel. I have a lot of pretty pretty names. I just don't use them. - the freak Do you consider yourself ...

    Aug 14, 2006
  • Lounge, The Re: YWS Awards Winners

    Maybe someone voted for you since she wanted to see more of your poetry and hoped to motivate you... *angelic look*

    Aug 14, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Horse

    I think you need to have some parallelism. Separate your subjects: A soft velvet nose where just being able to touch it is like a kiss on the cheek. Big ...

    Aug 13, 2006
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Draught of Power - The Thief's Torture

    Ignore?

    Aug 13, 2006
  • Randomosity Re: Woah, Like, That's Totally Bogus Dude

    Haha... I know I'm going to die a horrible death. When I get fries, I put even MORE salt on them. I'm sure my arteries would be full except for ...

    Aug 13, 2006
  • Writing Tips Re: Fallacies

    Fallacies are flaws in logic. Basically, if you try to use these methods, you won't get away with them. Why? Because you won't make sense. From stereotyping to personal attacks, ...

    Aug 12, 2006
  • Writing Tips Re: The Soundtrack to Your Story

    I used to do it quite frequently, but it's silent here now. "Gladiator" soundtrack is awesome though.

    Aug 12, 2006
  • Writing Tips Re: Short Assignments

    What book is this from?

    Aug 12, 2006
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Ads Are Back

    Mostly because, when I look for new posts, the first thing I do is look up and then down, and the Google ad distracts me.

    Aug 11, 2006
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Ads Are Back

    Ugh. It's still annoying. I would rather have them in the header.

    Aug 11, 2006
  • Randomosity Re: One Word Story Ring

    The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men graspe

    Aug 10, 2006
  • Welcome Mat Re: Heck Yes!

    Ooo! Paranormal stuff! I'm Snoink, and I'm the slave driver for many of the critiquers here. So you shall get many nice comments. :D

    Aug 10, 2006
  • Randomosity Re: One Word Story Ring

    The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men graspe

    Aug 10, 2006


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
— LCDR Geordi La Forge