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Ah, nice collage! It reminds me of a story I wrote. :) I love the gray flag and the heavy dark lines covering the red white and blueness of it ...

I'm going to be sent away. -- the freak Do you believe in magic?

Hahaha! I loved Captain Underpants! I mean... I was drawing my own crazy cartoons then, complete with inane story plots, and the fact that he could do it too -- ...

Hahaha... it's still doing better than http://www.snoink.com. :P

Yup, it's DEFINITELY faster. Except the chat. The chat is EXTRA scary today... EDIT: But I think the cache is making the recent topics on the home pagestay the same ...

The first stanza is wonderful in the imagery it creates. We find ourselves in the morgue along with the heroine, and it's just really creepy, which makes it THAT much ...

Hehehe... because I'm argumentive, I'm going to say that I like the "he doesn't exist" line without the "that" like Wiggy suggested because the strangeness of the lines makes it ...

Oh... the first stanza is just GORGEOUS. :) I love how it contrasts the images and characterizes the clouds. And it makes it seem like the people are meeting up ...

*puppy eyes* Can you put a translation here? :D

Oh dear... hehehe... When you do titles, you make sure that here's no frivalous punctuation in the title (thus, I took over your computer and took the period out) and ...

Aww... the last two lines are so sad! :( But I don't see the connection between the title and the actual poem. :?

You rock Lex! *sniffles*

Hehehe... the majority of SPEW members are more into the stories, save for about five. Maybe? So you haven't seen a lot of poetry critiques from us, hehe. :P Line-by-line ...

Not YWS... SEJ. Sociedad para escritores jovenes. I suppose I can help!

Hahah... this would make critiquing stories SO much easier, since you can get someone to edit the simple things...