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I think the weirdest thing about this poem is that you tell us everything. Instead of showing us tangible feelings, this poem relies on emotional thought to pull us through. ...

When Tanis replied to my critique. I wrote it in Word.

Eep! Well, I think Nate's playing around with the database, but the symbols actually mean something, honest. Maybe in a couple of hours, it'll look like something more legible. ^_^

Eep. I think the thingy came back again for the posts.

And the blogs are still a little weird. Otherwise, pretty awesome!

Yay! And this is where I get to say, “OMG, YOU USED THE NAME KARINA!” In that spelling. Which is obviously the coolest name in existence due to the fact ...

Haha, I hate it when that happens! Well, thank you! FREAK should look pretty now, I think, and that's what counts! :D

I second the "go write" statement. ;)

I don't like um, but I do use uh and er all the time!

You guys are lovely. Thanks for the feedback. Hehehe... I didn't say that you wouldn't have to change anything else. I just sounded what sounded better in that one sentence. ...

She's too passionate, as she's introduced now. She would never do what you want her to do eventually. So you have to change her character. Think Norman Bates. You want ...

You mean "Daishi!"

I did. - the freak Do you consider yourself artistic? How?

Hahaha... this sounds how my novel, FREAK, started out. A couple of warnings: Be very careful about the priest's sermon. The last thing that anybody wants to read is a ...

This is really interesting... like stuff that could be used for display in a museum! When you get rich after pulishing Bound, maybe you can start one up! ;)