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XD What grammatical errors? :P

DON'T EDIT IT. Otherwise, I will sic the pigs on you.

Yay! NOW happy birthday. ;)

Hahah... I dare! HI!

Hehe! Well, that's because my style obviously sucks. Nah, just kidding. It was the crabs that did it...

I looked up "limned." :P You still might want to change the word so it's not so confounded. And hehe! You can be subtle and detached. What you want to ...

Hehehe... first actually concentrates more on the character actually, methinks. And the week long diary isn't too bad! :P I know when I started writing in third person, I absolutely ...

I had a fever once. My ankle was sprained too. -- the freak That's nothing. Try magical illnesses. Ugh! - Solea You really need a unicorn... - Crystal Uh... that ...

Well.. yeah. Grif! Capitalize "will!" And... haha. Will Smith should TOTALLY be a member of SPEW. Skunk go boom!

'Twilight,' she said, 'Sunset and it's ugly.' Should be: 'Twilight,' she said. 'Sunset and it's ugly.' Notice the period. The dusk smudge-shade was gone, his pale face too wan. Wan ...

When should you kill off a character?

...who's Will? I wanna fire at him! But really. Bugs? Meh! It's time for the MIB to get involved... now, who wears black? Ah yes... Sam. And by Sam, I ...

Aw! I automatically love any short poem that has something to do with write. :)

Me? Carried away? Never! But, if this is a SPEW story, we might as well have proper grammar! :D

The only thing I had a problem with was the mention of tone holes. It took me out of the image of a real person and broke the magic for ...