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Thank you very much! I've been working on this quite a bit today, and any comments are much appreciated. :D

OKAY! I cleaned up some of the suckitude and made it more sparkly. Better?

Reyu on TYWC. Is he on this site? Much love Alicexoxoxo Yep! Though he doesn't post much...

I think it's illegal, but it feels nice. -- the freak Do you believe in God?

Blah-de-blah-blah? O_o

For all those who love to print out their work, this is for you! This is a link of proofreading symbols... very handy. :)

Haha... oh we *love* this subject. :roll: Bah. This is one of the most suckiest things ever that has happened. Okay! Serious! Critique! Here is my death recipe, made specially ...

Hehehe... I didn't see this before! How about "Hellfire" as a name?

My daughter. Though I'm pretty sure that many would say that about myself as well. -- Uclepidies Nah. Damien takes this one. -- Solea ~ Claude. I half want to ...

*glee* So basically what you wrote in your critique was that this part... She saw a unicorn. The unicorn was outside just below the streetlight, jumping up and down on ...

This goes for NJR... *smiles*

Okay... this post is the first draft. The second major draft is here: So if you want to see how much I progress with a draft, then you can see! ...

OMG! I love that story! *automatically gives A++++++* Nice rhyming job! I'm impressed. :)

Very sensual, but not much of a moving point. The clarinet produces a beautiful sound, and I think you could express it better. Give it more suspence, Snoikums. It's not ...

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