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Re: Expectations Falling
Really well written, although there are a few small things I'm a little confusing. Overall, my main concern is that I didn't exactly get the full concept; I got like, ...
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Re: Starting a war
I really like this a lot! It's always difficult with songs because of the reader's lack of music, because often times, the music can- actually, all the time- the music ...
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Re: Mr. Negativity vs Ms. Positivity
Very well written, and very entertaining as well! Although I've never played softball(not once!) I was somehow able to relate to the pressure you were feeling, and I was almost ...
Aug 31, 2011 -
Re: Don't Miss the Bus
ACT I Scene 1 (Lights up.) MACY Brian, I'll see you later... BRIAN Nope. You're going someplace awesome, and I'm coming! (MACY laughs.) MACY If only you knew. Brian Which ...
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Re: The sun can be cruel
To be honest, at first, I didn't really understand this poem until I did a quick analyzing in my head. It's nice how each stanza has the same beginning as ...
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Re: Grace
An incredible, yet short, poem. It all just sort of has this beautiful, effortless, aspect to it, although I can't pinpoint exactly what it is. Great work, loved it! Short ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Fire's Escape
I actually really like this poem! I love how the first line in both stanza's begins with in a way describing what the fire's doing. I also am a fan ...
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Re: Despite My Broken Heart
Is it bad to sit alone in the library every day at lunchtime rather than socialize with my peers? I asked her that once. It was a passing joke. She ...
Aug 30, 2011
