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Re: A Day To Remember
My throat was dry and I was terrified. Joining hands with me in a full circle was the rest of our team, the theater team, a.k.a Junior Thespians. Although we ...
Oct 12, 2011 -
Re: Clumsy
Great poem! I loved most of the elements, however, I'm super confused on the meaning... We live life like we write on paper; silly lines, you call them, scribbled inarticulately, ...
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: The Backseat Role
Wrong category... How do I change it? :/
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: The Backseat Role
All for one and none for me If you'd watch then you would see I can be more than you think But I'm shot down before I blink How long ...
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: Trojan Horse
This is a really incredible poem! The emotions conveyed are clear, and the language is truly beautiful! The word choice here really made it fabulous. I'll try to be nit-picky, ...
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: Sorry
Great work! However, I have a few nit-picky things. However this is a very relatable poem, and I really like the concept and how it was written ^^ Ok. Nit ...
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: Destination Freedom
Dainty echoes travelled through the air, each beat followed closely by yet another. Reaching out in long tendrils to all it passed, filling their ears with color, through sound. To ...
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: What happens when you watch Project Runway Religiously
Sparksflying: Thanks a bunch!! ^^ Go Project Runway!! MilknCookies: Kk :) And yea, you left it here :( Do you want me to post it for ya? Starlight9: Yay! Another ...
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: a taste of my photography
Wow. Honestly, this is great. The only problem is the size(I don't really mind it though), in my opinion. It's a truly beautiful picture, I love the colors in it, ...
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: The Lion
This is awesome! I love the usage of the old language, and it super duper annoys me when people use some old language, but not all! Fabulous work with consistency ...
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: What happens when you watch Project Runway Religiously
So me & MilknCookies(I haven't asked if I can put hers up, so right now I'm putting just mine) were drawing designs because we're both a bit obsessed with Project ...
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: Anime Drawing
I'm not an artist, so I can't exactly give you much technical critique, but seriously, I couldn't draw that for my life xD If your hairs bad... You seriously don't ...
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: Darkness Falls
Darkness covered the small town like a reverse blanket, chilling the bones of the citizens, sitting on-edge, waiting for 'The Taking', a cruel punishment towards those who did not belong ...
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: The One
Wow, I loved this poem a lot! I, like someone whoever posted before me, thought this would be the stereotypical love story poem, but instead I found myself reading a ...
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: Stone Cold Eyes
Stone Cold Eyes Filled Up With Pain Watching All The Dancing Rain Tear Drops Tear Drops Always Fall Trying Not To Lose It All Going Crazy Losing Hope Final Breaths ...
Sep 4, 2011
