SnapesOnAPlane

Ooh, Muse is cheeky! I liked that though, I really got the vision of this feisty girl threatening even while being kidnapped.

I liked the romantic moments, they were very sweet. Flame and Muse interacted very naturally with one another. The only real issue I had was with their names. "Muse" and ...

I like what you've got here so far, but there were some pacing issues. Slow it down a bit, and take time to introduce the characters a bit more. I ...

As evident from the giant "NOOB" stamped across my forehead, this is my first time to YWS. Actually, I just learned of its existence earlier this day. But this place ...