SnapesOnAPlane

An interesting start. The characters have distinct personalities, which is always good to see. Especially Vivian. She sounds like she's got more going on than meets the eye. Well, here ...

I must say, I'm intrigued. Is this a story about a supernatural killer, perhaps? Hmmm... Well, here are my thoughts: -It was a bit short and rushed. Prologues tend to ...

Yay! =D It's great to be on here, especially because I'm a noob. Thanks !

Erm...that was an interesting take on Sesame Street. I'm not sure what to think, to be honest. It certainly was creative, but, on the other hand...

Once upon an opening line, a noun verbed another noun.

Cdward Eullen was the hottest boy at Spoon Highschool.

Romeo & Juliet: Boy meets girl, girl fakes death, boy commits suicide, the end. A bunch of movies rip it off.

Generally, I enjoyed it, but I didn't like the way the characters talked. Their accents were a tad confusing. They spoke modernly, but then you threw in a few "thee"s ...

Woah, just woah =0 a good way. You really captured the raw emotions from something "so simple" as a Gym activity. I think everyone can relate to that experience on ...

A/N: This was done in response to a prompt (the word 'strength', here, a lack of). I'm not sure if I'll continue it or not, but I wanted to try ...

I really like the style. I hope you write more of this-I'm intrigued.

Ooh, reviews section. I know where I'll be spending a lot of time...

Oh, as for the sidekick's name, I had to make a name that was nearly pronounceable and only had one vowel. It was for a contest in one of my ...

This sounds interesting! I'm looking forward to reading more. blowing her long hair about. 'about' is not the right word here. aycee clicked her fingers again You forgot the "J". ...

I liked the incorporation the clock theme, how it mimicked her Dad's hobby, I mean. That's certainly unique. Footstep after heavy footstep, I trudged through the newly-formed snowdrifts, praying that ...