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The Power of the Crystal Noctis was on the brink off falling asleep on his throne, his head rested on his hand. The back of the stone seat was connected ...

I'll start by saying you spelt contest wrong in the title. This piece is rather weird. I know it's a short story but it didn't really go anywhere. All that ...

The Power of the Crystal Noctis was on the brink off falling asleep on his throne, his head rested on his hand. The back of the stone seat was connected ...

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This is intresting. There's a few spelling mistakes: me to us both hands broadsword sword would every make a I'm not really sure about this sentence: Uncontrollable fear grips me, ...

Sorry, I didn't manage to read all of this. This is quite good from what I've read so far though. - who stood by the light switch with a gun ...

Your descriptions and wording are very good. I didn't quite get the beginning, maybe you should work on explaining it more clearly. Smoke like an octopuses tendrils caressed the distant ...

Very intresting. I know you speak a different language so this must be very difficult for you. Well done. Just a few things I noticed: But there place where it ...

The Mansion Of Valour Our officer briefs us on the plan in the back of the truck. “Listen up.” He said. “Basically, we’re to ambush this point here.” He points ...

I didn't manage to read all of it but from what I read I thought it was OK. Like the person said above me watch you're POV. You've said things ...

This was good! I just didn't like how it ended. It was a bit pointless and didn't really mean anything. A good peice of writing though, very detailed.

@Veritas You're completely right about it being cliche. I just joined yesterday and was looking for a short story just to get me started and this was the first thing ...

This was quite good. The first thing I thought when I saw this was the lack of PARAGRAPHS! It was just a wall of writing. I don't know if you ...

I joined yesterday so I thought I would post something. This isn't much, I just typed this up in an hour. Odin I look out from the castle balcony, a ...