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  • Science-Fiction Novels
    Re: The Seed of Life

    Prologue: The Prince's Convoy Prince Evan, meticulously sipped the white wine. He puckered, examining the converging flavors in his mouth. "Fine quality, Joel." Evan set the wine glass, carefully on ...

    Apr 23, 2010

  • Science-Fiction Novels
    Re: A Hole in the World - Chapter One

    I think this story has real potential. Aurum obviously has some close relationship with this "Albino Guy" and that should be explained further in the story. I have some questions ...

    Feb 28, 2010


  • Chapter 1: Mundane Quarrels Staring out into the field of bloodshed, I cannot help but think how pointless it is. The humans' screams and minotaurs' grunts travel through the iron ...

    Nov 30, 2009

  • Science-Fiction Short Stories
    Re: Hunter Games (Ch. 1; pt. 1)

    I really liked this story. It gives a futuristic twist on the ever-popular multi-race aspect of stories. But yes, I agree with Griffinkeeper that if her bounty is so high ...

    Nov 30, 2009

  • Science-Fiction Short Stories
    Re: Sylenit

    I didn't see any mistakes but, I'm just wondering what the word padded means because, you seemed to use the word a lot. Also, I would advice using her name ...

    Jul 23, 2009


  • I haven't read the first part of your story, but I can tell just from this, that it will be good. I catches the reader and leaves a sense of ...

    Mar 22, 2009

  • Fantasy Short Stories
    Re: Short Elf story

    Thanks for taking your time to review it! Ya I'm new so I will post a revised version and PM you. -Smilykid :)

    Mar 20, 2009

  • Fantasy Short Stories
    Re: Wolfskin

    Your writing is very rich and descriptive! I really like it. "Would it interest you to learn that there is another version of the name's origins?" I would change "version" ...

    Mar 20, 2009

  • Fantasy Novels
    Re: LIfe chapter 3?

    That was pretty good. Here I'll give you a review. They were sitting at are brand new, falling apart, kitchen table, drinking tea that we were supposed to be saving ...

    Mar 20, 2009

  • Fantasy Short Stories
    Re: Short Elf story

    A short story about an elf named Uruvion and his friend/ girlfriend, Niva. Enjoy! Uruvion sniffed the cold, rancid air of the night. Being an elf he had better sense ...

    Mar 19, 2009


The magic is only in what books say, how they stitched the patches of the universe together into one garment for us.
— Ray Bradbury, Fahrenheit 451