Smexaykk01

Gee, you almost have me in tears here! Its so emotional. But you are giving to much info dumps... You are describing things that aren't necessary... But I still find ...

How dare he I thought to myself. Should be: How dare he, I thought to myself. Other than that it was good, very awesome. But in other ways it is ...

This is very creative is so many ways, The way you talk about God and Angels mocking us is very moving, maybe they do y'know... Do the angels above weep? ...

Its good! I like what you talk about and stuff, its pretty cool. But what are you talking about? Like angels or something or is that just me being blonde... ...

I find this a bit dry This doesn't carry emotion at all, it lacks a lot of it. Try deepen it a little bit to try and add some emotion ...

Dear Dad, I really, really miss you. It’s been 8 years now; Mom always says you are safe where you are. She says you are in a beautiful place called ...

I like it alot! but there is some places where you need to rub out more, because you can still see many places where you have previously drawn but erased. ...

This was drawn by me, I know its not that good. But I thought I should give new things a go and put it on yws!

I love it! Biffle has pointed out the nitpiks already, but i just wanted to say that it was fantastic! AWESOME STUFF ciao ~Smexx

Cool! I like it, your description is not vapid and boring but fun and awesome! I like this lot and you shout keep going on with this! PM me for ...

This is very cool, I love your description and deepness. You are talented, I'll tell you that. keep writing! PM me if you need anything! ~Smexx

I love it~!~ This is so fluent and it makes me want to read it over and over again! You are very talented! Keep writing ~SMexx

I don't really like this one, I'm sorry. It has no detail to it and it did not give me that feeling that things like these are supposed to give ...

I like this, by the looks of it you are very descriptive in your work. Your choices of names and characters are very cool and I enjoyed this thoroughly! Keep ...

Its brilliant!!!! 100% original!!!! LOVE IT ~smexx