SlyNightOwl

I really like how you don't give specific names. By doing that, it adds to the imagery. I pictured two boys waking up in the morning, finding out their parents ...

I just realized that I haven't read any of the story up to this point xD I'm sorry, I just clicked on be the first to review. So I'll just ...

I know you said you've already gotten help with this first part, but is it okay if I give my opinion anyway? I won't be harsh, I promise(: The nightmares ...