SlyNightOwl

She looked down at her new daughter, and, flinching back in alarm, she nearly dropped her child. I think the correct way of writing this would be: She looked down ...

Nice drawing(: Did you do this? And also is there a story that goes with this?

Cool(:

D: I can't go to the bookstore right now, it's ten o'clock, I'm fifteen, and still live under my parents roof. I'm SO happy for you though. It must feel ...

Lol, that's me right there. I've got notebooks that traveled with me through seventh grade, they're full of course. Ideas would always come to me in the most boring classes ...

I don't think the ending is weak at all. I actually had goose bumps on my arms and legs. Very nice.

Your poem shows the truth. I don't like admitting that this can actually happen, probably has happened. I love what you've written, though. It's beautiful

Grammar-wise, everything looks correct.

:)I found the first entry (yay) and it sounds just as good as the first. I spotted nothing incorrect, grammar-wise, unless I missed it from being caught up in the ...

:D I'm really looking forward to what comes next! It sounds amazing so far! A couple comments I have are that you need to space out the dialog instead having ...

I like you :{D You sound cool. My name is Keela. I've never been good in horror, so I'm interested in reading your stuff. Yeah, my play writing isn't to ...

This sounds amazing! Your writing is really good and I didn't see any errors. If it were an assignment you'd most definitely get an A+. Have an apple and be ...

It is a little confusing, but a girl from school comes to mind when reading this. A popular girl who thinks she's got it all together but the little whispers ...

:)This story made me smile. Except I only read half way through it before I began skimming. Although it sounds like a really interesting read there wasn't really a hook ...

I really like how you don't give specific names. By doing that, it adds to the imagery. I pictured two boys waking up in the morning, finding out their parents ...