Slothman

hewhehehehehehe 'geezer' "funky indie riffs"--- You rock my world Fire. One suggestion to change the second stanza, because you have an accidental rhyme scheme. I think one set of rhyming ...

I actually found that really good. And thats saying something for me 'cause I'm more into rock but it was really good. If that is how you think, you may ...

hahahahahahahahahahahahaha, sorry I found that so cool. The part about the pizza really speeks to me.

Good work. I'm not going to go into as much detail as some people, and that would be pointless as I've already told you about the spelling errors I found ...

I ACTUALLY ENJOYED THAT. AND YOU SAID I WOULDN'T LIKE YOUR POEMS.