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Wow! this poem was VERY nice! You were able to use complicated words but not overdo your gift of words. The rhyme and rhythm you used made the poem easy ...

This is great! Although I wish you had put Ron and Hermione in it as well. They are my 2 favorite characters in the movie! I saw the movie at ...

Wow! Very nice poem! I could really feel the power behind it! My only suggestion is that for your next poem, don't make it all one big sentence with a ...

Thought that the book "City of Ember" was much better than the movie. The movie had bad actors and it was just plain awful. Thats really all i have ti ...

My least favorite book of all time was probably a tie between "Moccasin Trail" by Eloise Jarvis McGraw and "All Sail Set" by Armstrong Sperry. They were long and boring ...

The only thing i would change is when you are continuing a sentence in the next line, use commas to show people that it is the same thought. Some people ...

Hello! I thought your story was very good, but the thing that really ruined it for me was your choice of wors to describe the "creepy creature". The use of ...