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  • Art & Photography Re: Calypso

    Ok, lets just say that anyone who thinks your bad at digital art, is absolutely out of their mind and should be sent to prison for not appreciating art! You ...

    Mar 24, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Nature at its Best

    I have been taking these pictures over a long period of time. But I think I am finally ready to share them with the public! Please don't be bashful! I ...

    Mar 24, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Untitled

    Ok, this is the first drawing I have done in over a year. I have never taken any art classes or had any experience with art whatsoever. I thought I ...

    Mar 19, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Grade School

    Dear NovemberNovelist, I am going to give you a very important tip that will help you VERY much throughout your time here on YWS. It is not the best idea ...

    Dec 31, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Hollow Bones

    Dear Persephoneia, That poem was absolutely wonderful. You have SO much potential! You used wonderful vocab which I am always a big fan of. Really, I just can't find the ...

    Dec 31, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: The Earth

    Ok, let me just say that I really liked the meaning of the poem, but I didn't like the poem. It was much too short for such a large concept. ...

    Dec 31, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Moon

    I'm very excited to be your reviewer today! A sliver of silver, a river of light. I just loved those 2 opening statements. Very well done! Cascading down my bed ...

    Dec 30, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Look At Me

    Very excited to be your reviewer today! Look at me.Tell me what you see. I am thin. I’m not the guy who’d always grin. I feel like you could have ...

    Dec 30, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Suffocation

    Thanks to everyone for your criticism I'll be sure to remember it next time I'm writing a poem. And thank you Angelus for recognizing the bright light as God. that ...

    Dec 30, 2010
  • Poetry Discussion Re: Inspiration?

    For my inspiration, I like to look at pictures! I have this cute little book of photography that I look through all the time. Try going to your local library ...

    Dec 30, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Tree

    Very nice poem! I LOVE the point you made, although at the end of the poem instead of saying "Each an innocent life taken for what,A simple tree?" I would ...

    Dec 30, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Prayer

    That was very touching. You have a very wonderful way with words. And keeping the poem fixed upon our Lord made it even better! Great job!

    Dec 30, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Stuff

    Oh my! That poem is just too cute! I can relate to every single line of it. I actually prefer simple, funny poems like this as opposed to long, strongly ...

    Dec 30, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Suffocation

    Her arms were bruised, her legs scraped and bleeding. Burns marked her wrists, from the course ropes wrapped tightly around her. Her mouth was dry, but her forehead was soaked. ...

    Dec 30, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My Dog and Me

    This was a very nice poem indeed. You expressed your feelings in a way that lets anyone with a dog relate to you. I could relate, but more with my ...

    Dec 30, 2010


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