SleepyJackie

Thank you all very, very much for your reviews! (Especially baron.vrinda - PM me if you want any reviews from me :)) No harsh critiques? xD I'm not sure whether ...

Your words, strawberry-foamed woven gold sugar-coated damp promises, gently align in the empty spaces of oblivion, lovingly entwine with the cloudy texture of my prayers on your heavy silver letters. ...

Hello there! I'm Jackie & I'll be reviewing your poem. The Nighttime Sky Somehow, I wasn't sure whether this is just the title again or whether it's actually meant to ...

Hi there (: Um, where can I start off? I read this, like, 20 times. And I still don't get it. At all. could you see what I see First ...

Hi there! I'll be reviewing (or trying to, since i'm not such an expert) your poem today. First of all, the story. It's not really original, is it? We've heard ...

Hi there! (: There is not much to be added to the reviewers before me. However, I have a little idea for you: People before me have mentioned the rhyme. ...

Wow. I totally loved it, every single word! Usually, I prefer poetry with rhyme, but this one proves that it can have a great flow without rhyme. Someone has mentioned ...

Thank you! I get what you're saying. I'll try to use your advice in further writing. Thanks very much for reviewing & explaining (:

Thank you for all for reviewing. I understand the points you criticise. smorgishborg, could you give me an example of what is, in your eyes, a vivid image? That might ...

You’re the top for my bottom that doesn’t quite fit You feel like soft cotton with an iron tip. You’re like a love song gone rock’n’roll What you say is ...

Hi there (: You already got a great and long review from Incognito Temptation, but still I couldn't resist telling you a few things about your text. I just read ...

Oh, it's nice to hear that you guys like the idea or are even using it yourselves (: I have to admit I've never heard of McCarthy. I'll pay attention ...

Hello there (: I'm going to get started right away.. I breathed in again, drawing the smooth tobacco of an American cigarette, with tobacco picked by some spic that swam ...

First of all hello, and thank you for reading this (: I've just started a novel, and I really hope I will finally keep this one going and maybe even ...

Hi there, Merlin (: I personally enjoy a prologue that leaves questions open, that throws a "ball of wool" into the room which is then slowly disentangled during the story ...