SkyeDreamer

Yes, yes, YES. I love it! Sometimes, people make an opinion about Christians before even getting to know us. But we're more than just soft-spoken people who walk around saying, ...

This is a great metaphor! I'm assuming that God is the artist and He does His work through you. I love that! I also assume that you're fairly new, so... ...

I like the concept of it, but I agree that it needs to flow better. The last line in the first stanza really doesn't work (for me), but I don't ...

And beg, as like a street rat, he should stay./Humiliation, then, my being be. I love this part! I can't really say why, I just really liked the wording of ...

Hey! I liked this; it was easy to relate to, and even though it was simple, it somehow kept me interested. Sure, it was short. Maybe it could have been ...

I wrote this in bed one night; it just sort of came to me. And yes, it might be a *little* vague, but I want it to be a little ...

I liked the way you were able to tell a lovely story in just a few words. I always think it would be interesting to write a really short poem ...

This. was. incredible!! It was simpler, but still had great feeling and imagery. I thought it was the perfect length- some people might have thought it was too long, and ...

I'm always really drawn to books about ballet dancers, so I figured I'd read this. I really enjoyed it. There were some mistakes with grammar, punctuation, etc. so you may ...

This was funny! I do wish you had rhymed more; it could have turned this from amusing to hilarious. As other reviews have pointed out, it needed a little editing. ...

Some say the world will end in fire,Some say in ice.From what I%u2019ve tasted of desire I hold with those who favor fire. But if it had to perish twice,I ...

Just a hint, be careful because at the start you miss spaces, and i'm not sure if it's there for affect, but it just annoyed me. Check over your spelling ...

You took a cliche topic and made it sound good. It reminds me a little but of "Long Gone" by Lady Antebellum, but your song is still unique. I enjoyed ...

This was very good. I think you should have rated it as 16+ or at least 12+, but that's just me. I liked it, though.

This was a school assignment last year and not my favorite poem I've written at all. It was my first try at this style of poem, though, so I just ...