SkyeDreamer

I've had writer's block since... I don't know, November? I get lots of ideas for stories and poems, but can't for the life of me make them flow. They end ...

Maybe he's into music? He wants to be around music constantly, but can't find music that lives up to his expectations in the age he's living in. It becomes his ...

When I sketch, I'll listen to music that inspires me- music with lyrics I relate to, etc. Just stuff to get me feeling creative. With writing, though, I'll rarely listen ...

Oh! I just reread this. This is actually not at all confusing; I just must not have been reading carefully. This is really good! It's stronger than I gave it ...

This is good! One thing: crums should be crumbs. Other than that, I found no errors I needed to point out. It was a little confusing, because at first I ...

Emo poetry tells the reader how the writer feels, while good poetry shows the reader what's going on... A good poem will be something people can relate to. Emo poetry ...

Well, this is a late review, but just wanted to say that this is good! It is punchy, like others have said, and I could definitely get the meaning. So... ...

Would you mind reviewing mine? Thanks!!

This was truly incredible. It was so depressing, so real, so... wonderfully terrible. This must be the best thing I've read on YWS. Now, for the nitpicks- sorry :(. My ...

This was really, really cute. It reminded me of my cats (especially when they were kittens), and how great an animal friend can be. I assume this was intentional, but ...

I'm glad people mentioned the ninja thing, because I was unsure of it too. I wasn't sure what other word to put to convey the meaning, but I'll keep thinking. ...

please read the spoiler I don't think this makes a lot of sense, but I didn't really know how to do this type of poem so I just dove in. ...

I'm sorry, but I disagree with Persephoneia. If this is "almost disappointing" for your work, then I want to read lots more. I am generally more of a poetry person ...

I haven't read the other chapters, but this still drew me in. First of all, I love the name "Ashling." It's uncommon and very pretty. I loved your word choices ...

This was FUN! Haha, I laughed a lot. Kinda true, though. The positive parts (friends, etc) and negative (WRITERS BLOCK!!!) :) Good!!