SkyeDreamer

Hi, here to review for the contest! Well, here we go! Her frail, white body glides across the snow cold room. Pale grey eyes watch you, waiting for something. Good ...

*like* So, at first, I was thinking, "Why is this featured? It is really pretty, but there doesn't seem to be anything... extra- special." Then, by probably the 3rd stanza, ...

I got in! Thank you for all the reviews! :)

Hey, here to review! Overall, nice work, although you used a lot of commas where they were not needed. Anyway, here we go (my comments will be blue)... It's where ...

Okay, you are just really good. Your imagery is great, the work is good... never stop writing!

I didn't mind the long sentences; in fact, it gave the whole poem a waltzy, rolling feel in my opinion. I really liked this!

There is nothing left I can say, except that this was incredible. I loved it!!

As a "real" literary piece, the ending wasn't as strong as it could've been, and it was a little short. As a "just for fun" story, though, I loved this! ...

My tail swished through the frosty mess As I moved through my frozen home. I clumsily pounced, sunk, and tried again To find a sturdier place to roam. I looked ...

This is an essay for a month-long creative writing camp called A Novel Idea. We write and publish a novel in a month, and I really want to be accepted! ...

Loved this story! I thought part one was a little funnier, where this one was more about the storyline. But that's not a bad thing, at all. The Ben Affleck ...

Usually I don't read comedies but this was hilarious! I'll do a better reply with part two. See you there!

This was very interesting. The major nitpicks have been pointed out, except for one. along with their friend Mr. A.S. Neil who is a good friend of theirs. Their friend ...

I haven't read part one, but I thought this was very good. My one problem with it is the last paragraph; the whole piece was so strong, then this seemed ...

Aww, I loved this! I really liked the idea that you had everything dear to you in one box, then you ended with the Bible... As a fellow Christian, I ...