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Re: The Eagle and I
Hey, Cammie! Here to review for the contest... This was really good. You made the flow work well and the wording was very good. You’ve got to be kidding me. ...
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Re: Ear Tags
Sorry, don't know what happened there with the odd symbols.
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: Ear Tags
Well, I think Glimmerglass really summed most of it up, but since you submitted it to my contest, I'm still going to review ('cause I want to :p). Sorry if ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: On the edge of Time
I liked this; it almost seemed metaphoric to me. Okay, here we go for the full review! My comments will be blue. On the edge of time The world fell ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: "Fight Alongside Me"
This was really good! It had feeling and the word choices were nice. Well, now for the full review. As always, my comments will be in blue. :) I can ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: Finding My Light
Alright, here to review for the contest! I did like this, but some parts didn't flow right. Still, a nice poem. Alright, here we go; my comments will be blue! ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: My Hero
I really liked this poem! Alright, my comments will be blue. He was my Idol And everything I wished to be. Through thick and thin, He was there. To me, ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: The Slaughterhouse
Creepy, but very good! I liked the casual attitude of this, as if the person had been through the process a billion times. Here we go- my comments will be ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: Little Birdie
This is a cute poem! It's short and sweet, so it may be hard to do a full review, but I promised one and I'm going to give one! My ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: Bumblebee's Journey
Aaah! Why did the blue not show up? Oh well, sorry about that... hopefully it won't be too confusing...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: Bumblebee's Journey
Hey, Cammie! Here to review, as promised. I really liked this. It was different than most poetry I've read; it was lighthearted for the most part, but also had sort ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: Night of Perfection
You submitted this to my contest. All the other poems have been given a full review, with me quoting the poem and giving thoughts by stanza, but this poem doesn't ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: Ode to a Bat
This flowed well, the rhymes were good and unforced, and you made bats seem... enrapturing. So, my comments will be blue. Creature of darkness and terror of night, Who dances ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: Ocean song
This is beautiful, and I really hope my sister (the other contest judge) likes it! This was so powerful, yet still peaceful. It took me back to the ocean at ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: The robin
Love the rhymes. Love the message. Love the wording. Ready for this full review? No promises that this is a winner (in the contest), but it is incredible and has ...
Jul 7, 2011
