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  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Eagle and I

    Hey, Cammie! Here to review for the contest... This was really good. You made the flow work well and the wording was very good. You’ve got to be kidding me. ...

    Jul 8, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Ear Tags

    Sorry, don't know what happened there with the odd symbols.

    Jul 7, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Ear Tags

    Well, I think Glimmerglass really summed most of it up, but since you submitted it to my contest, I'm still going to review ('cause I want to :p). Sorry if ...

    Jul 7, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: On the edge of Time

    I liked this; it almost seemed metaphoric to me. Okay, here we go for the full review! My comments will be blue. On the edge of time The world fell ...

    Jul 7, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: "Fight Alongside Me"

    This was really good! It had feeling and the word choices were nice. Well, now for the full review. As always, my comments will be in blue. :) I can ...

    Jul 7, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Finding My Light

    Alright, here to review for the contest! I did like this, but some parts didn't flow right. Still, a nice poem. Alright, here we go; my comments will be blue! ...

    Jul 7, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My Hero

    I really liked this poem! Alright, my comments will be blue. He was my Idol And everything I wished to be. Through thick and thin, He was there. To me, ...

    Jul 7, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Slaughterhouse

    Creepy, but very good! I liked the casual attitude of this, as if the person had been through the process a billion times. Here we go- my comments will be ...

    Jul 7, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Little Birdie

    This is a cute poem! It's short and sweet, so it may be hard to do a full review, but I promised one and I'm going to give one! My ...

    Jul 7, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Bumblebee's Journey

    Aaah! Why did the blue not show up? Oh well, sorry about that... hopefully it won't be too confusing...

    Jul 7, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Bumblebee's Journey

    Hey, Cammie! Here to review, as promised. I really liked this. It was different than most poetry I've read; it was lighthearted for the most part, but also had sort ...

    Jul 7, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Night of Perfection

    You submitted this to my contest. All the other poems have been given a full review, with me quoting the poem and giving thoughts by stanza, but this poem doesn't ...

    Jul 7, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Ode to a Bat

    This flowed well, the rhymes were good and unforced, and you made bats seem... enrapturing. So, my comments will be blue. Creature of darkness and terror of night, Who dances ...

    Jul 7, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Ocean song

    This is beautiful, and I really hope my sister (the other contest judge) likes it! This was so powerful, yet still peaceful. It took me back to the ocean at ...

    Jul 7, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The robin

    Love the rhymes. Love the message. Love the wording. Ready for this full review? No promises that this is a winner (in the contest), but it is incredible and has ...

    Jul 7, 2011


Life is the art of drawing sufficient conclusions from insufficient premises.
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