SkyeDreamer

I was actually about to say, this wasn't set up like a typical poem! It was very good, though. Sorry, but I didn't quite like the part about Texas Hold ...

This is really impressive! I would never be able to do that, sketching or coloring it. And you did it all with your mouse, wow! I liked the colors you ...

I haven't edited on here yet, but I am going back into my novel and redoing a few parts, per your tips. :) Thank you so much! And I will ...

Please be constructive and don't kill this... it is my first attempt at a novel and I don't even know if I should be posting it... So really I just ...

Nitpick first: "eaten and prayed upon" prayed should by preyed, I think. Like prey... That's it. This was incredible! Maybe a little confusing, but really great. At first I wondered ...

This was really sad and powerful, even more so because it is based on a real event. I have a nitpick: When I get home it’s gotten worse. That doesn't ...

I really like the story in this. You had some grammar errors: "seamed" should be "seemed" and you missed some punctuation (especially commas), but this was pretty good. It was ...

This is very good; I could really get into the characters and imagine the story. I did think some parts were slightly confusing, especially at first with who was who, ...

This was really funny! But grr... You never leave anything for us reviewers to nitpick! You're always too thorough! Oh, wait, there is the one, but it has already been ...

First of all, I'd like to say that I think in general cursing is ugly and bad, but it fit in with the story and gave it even more character. ...

Okay, I agree with bits and pieces of both Isha and Skorpionne; here is my full review (in blue)- I'll do general comments after. :) Once a glorious flower , ...

I, too, liked the abstractness and the imagery of this. Some people would find it confusing, but when they look deeper, they would understand it just fine. Did that make ...

Yay, you entered my contest! You always write the most unique things, so I'm really glad right now... Anyway, time for my full review. My comments will be in blue, ...

Here reviewing for the contest! First thing's first: Don't get discouraged by the criticism. Every poet makes mistakes, even the "greats," so don't feel hopeless. I'll do the full review ...

Here to review, as promised! You used good imagery in this poem. Okay, here I go- my comments will be blue. Glittering like a sapphire in the lap of rolling ...