SkyeDreamer

This was really good. I'm sure many people could relate to it. I liked the imagery, too!

This message is good, but I didn't really like it as a poem. Someone else said that already, so I won't go into it. But it was definitely a good ...

*clicking like button* I really liked this. It felt kind of... free and whimsical to me. I'm not going to point out any changes; it seemed like you considered your ...

It is very confusing at times, as other comments were saying, but it's good. I like the comparisons you use, even though I don't understand all of them. It needs ...

Actually, the simple style is really pretty and sweet. It does sort of portray innocence, and the poem is very sweet. I really liked it. Any "mistakes" have already been ...

It's really good but pretty dark. I liked the image and feeling the poem portrayed... good job. I agree with Tamara; I couldn't really find anything wrong here.

Her eyes fell upon a young man, perhaps only a year older than herself. The man was wearing a coat, vest, slacks, and leather boots laced up to his shins. ...

This is cute! It maybe could have flowed a little better, but my favorite teacher just came back from maternity leave and this reminded me of her, so... I enjoyed ...

Day 1 I’m sorry I’m not good enough, But really, I thought I did try. I don’t know why you act this way, Why you must make me want to ...

That was really good; it summed up how I feel, too. Every poem might not be incredible, but they are all from the heart and a part of us. Good ...