SkyeDreamer

Hi y'all! How are you? I'd love if you would review my narrative about love in an age of undefined relationships. Thank you, thank you, thank you!!

Hi! I don't have a name for this novel yet, so it'll remain Novel #2 forever... whenever I think of a name, I'll put it as a spoiler, I suppose. ...

This was a very powerful poem; it held my attention all the way through. However, as much as I enjoyed this, I have a few critiques. I have a simple ...

Wow. Wow, wow, wow. I don't know how to review this without cheapening its value, honestly; this was so beyond wonderful. You just packed all the emotion you could've into ...

I stepped into the icy prison, prepared for another day of anguish and abuse. I was a convict, wrongly accused, surrounded by the aloof yet alert eyes of sentinels waiting ...

D4D4D4 Just wanted to say, I LOVE this poem. It's not cliche, but still easier to understand than some really overdone stuff. (Does that make sense? Please disregard anything nonsensical ...

This was a really good start to the novel. There are lots of parts I could pick out that I liked a lot, but that list could go on for ...

Wow. That was really unexpected. First of all, I'd like to repeat what the other commenters said: This was great because it was about something that really affects people; also, ...

I tend to be a fairly doom- and- gloom poet who writes a lot of emotional stuff (whether bad or good). But I can honestly say, I liked this! Very ...

Wow, this is really good! I love the way you use words, almost... not abstractly or differently exactly, but... I don't quite know. I liked it, though! Great poem. You ...

This was me sorting out my emotions... Sorry if it's kinda long. Please review/ help me improve it. And if you like it... you know what to do! I never ...

Mini review here, since I have to go! Alright, I love this topic. My only nitpick would be that (especially in the first 2 paragraphs) you repeated or overused a ...

I liked this! I haven't read the other chapters, but this one was pretty good. What was going on with the characters and the werewolves..? I know you must've explained ...

I. love. this. A lot. There I was, feeling all proud of what I'd written recently, and I came here and read your poem, and... wow. That's all I have ...

I really liked this, especially the ending. It felt almost like a tribal song or something like that to me; the flow was quite good. Then the end, like I ...