Skye

Light. It fell on a quivering, sensitive mouth. Lips. Lips were mouthing words, Words I did not want to hear. Pain. Absorbing, beautiful pain. Pain eased itself through every pore ...

Recalcitrant. I have no idea what it means, but as others said before me, it just sounds cool.

This is beautiful; I absolutely love it! But what is more rewarding, then traveling from who you are to who you can become? I love that stanza...beautiful...

I got the impression myself that the Yellow Towel Person was male, but that's just me. I really love this! Very interesting, and it made me laugh out loud! ~Skye ...

I know Lemony Snicket is only writing up to book # 13 (get it? unlucky thirteen?) The movies don't look too good though, Count Olaf is all wrong. I myself ...

I agree with Firestarter , I write fantasy for the challange and the feeling of making something completely different that actually seems real . Oh, and there is the fact ...

This is really good! Dark, with a good message in it. No matter how you see him Find the knife, and take it For you shouldn't be that close. I ...

Come. Steal away my agony and pain. Bear me to a place fair to look upon And leave me there to the glowing starlight. Leave me to the butterflies that ...

I love it! Beautiful stuff! I just have one thing: Solom mouth Should be "Solemn mouth" I think. Otherwise, it's great! Blue eyes Watch They sparkle Delighted At what they ...

I love it! I just have one question: Does this take place before or after the last story snippet you posted? Just wondering ... You write beautifully; I can really ...

Same thing everyone above me already said, and my congrats on writing a great poem! :wink:

I write YA fantasy (ironic, no?). I don't necessarily do an outline, or at least not on paper. As soon as I get an idea (and it is usually for ...

And how could I forget Princess Mononoke? (Ashitaka is so cool!) Oh, and Sprited Away is awesome too.

Moving... It's nicely written, and a powerful message.

I love it! It rhymes beautifully and conveys a message. Great! ~Skye Demon