Skye

Ew. So this is what I wrote like three freaking years ago. *cringes* Please. No crits. Just let this one die.

the slurred phonetics of a flickering lightbulb hung like guilt over our heads and sent our shadows screeching across windowpanes and vacant voids disguised as mouths. silence crossed the floorboards ...

First off, welcome! I hope you enjoy your stay here at YWS! :) You see the globe icon at the top of the page that says "Forums" underneath? If you ...

How could I resist a title like this? ;) The only complaint I have is the "hand/hand" rhyme in the first stanza. I realize it's a ghazal, and that rhyming ...

But I finally forced him to agree to be my boyfriend! ;)

Whew. Now I'm reassured. :)

I was going to welcome you, but I just don't know how to follow that last post up. Sorry.

Haha, I might take you up on that -- I had meant to crit this way earlier, but somehow ... forgot. Anyways, I really enjoyed this. In fact, I'd be ...

lol, at first I thought you were talking about the Stock Market or something -- not corn stalks . :P

Liam -- what a lovely name! Anyone who likes both ska and acoustic-y/folk music is sure to be a good friend of mine. ;) I look forward to seeing you ...

Ah, I knew I had seen one online here! I'm still working on poems to be sent out this summer. It seems now they're numbering upwards of seven...? :shock: I ...

Ah! Well, you welcomed me over at TW, so I figure I should return the favor here on my own turf. :) Welcome, Ed! I look forward to seeing you ...

I crit enough to keep up my 2:1 ratio, but then again, I don't post my own work that often. I went with once or twice a week, because that's ...

up alleys city never saw cold ... are anna and boy crushing words and noses and losing forever more by the minute ....... ; .. yes ... anna and bedsheets ...

I figured you had a good reason -- again, it was a very enjoyable read. :)