Skye

Wow. It's really a shame that this doesn't have more responses. First off, I'd like to say this is absolutely gorgeous. I especially loved the second-to-last stanza; it's a great ...

Wow. This was absolutely amazing! The parts in French are beautifully written, and sound especially good in such a gorgeous language. I'm sorry that I really have nothing to critique, ...

I really liked this! Right from the beginning, you hooked me in with those two lines, which also set the tone nicely for the rest of the poem, by the ...

in your mind, jagged melodies are cutting themselves to pieces while a senseless snarl of sound disintegrates into lilting lyrics and bass-lines that reverberate in your chest cavity. in your ...

I really liked this. It was raw and passionate and very...palpable? Is that the word I'm looking for? I think so. This is especially meaningful because my mom's best friend ...

Oh, this is definitely very true, but I think you could have used more imagey in writing this. There isn't anything that particularly stands out; it just sounds like plain ...

Goodnight Goodnight - Hot Hot Heat

Ooh, I really like this a lot! Like Bobo said, the mix between realistic and deeply emotional was great. Overall, it was a strong poem from beginning to end, and ...

This is good for a first attempt at poetry! Now, let's see here ... Where to go to be alone? Is it possible to be alone when thoughts are a ...

I like! 8/10.

Disclaimer: I know nothing about the technical aspects of playing and/or singing music, but I'm a music fan and I know what I like when I hear it. Very pretty. ...

Dark and peaceful. 8/10.

Invisible. What is the standard color of type in books?

That was hilarious! As soon as you get those other parts up, post them right away.

Love it! 9/10