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I didn't think this was bad at all -- in fact I loved it. The one thing I think you could do is strengthen some of your descriptions, as some ...

I may, if I can come up with some decent photography (as I am otherwise hopeless at art). Know I'll be thinking on it. If nothing else, you have fantastic ...

Jack -- your hair be the shizz. :) Clau -- the lighthouse pic is really pretty. And I totally recognized the NaNo shirt right away!

Ha, evened things up 50/50 with a girl vote. :D But really, girl. Think of all the pink!

If you don't mind, I'll come back to look at this new version when I happen to have time. *Will edit crit in here*

This was fantastic, EBM! You used powerful language and showed a great poetry-writing competency in general (Are you sure you don't write poetry often? Because you should!). I'm going to ...

these filthy sidewalks starchy backbones pretending blinding spinal columns to walk and spit on gracing ground for parasites we’re barely sightless [parasiteless] barely broken facing shards of brea

Snoink, you are my new hero. Fantastic! Well-thought out, and witty to perfection. Perhaps for the title? Alternative History: How the Wooden Horse Never Came to Be Seems a little ...

This was absolutely beautiful, Colleen -- I loved it. In fact, I only have the tiniest little nit-pick for you: in III, the word "frozen" seemed very out of place. ...

Two words: Shel. Silverstein.

Yes, please don't start a debate -- this is not the place. I, for one, enjoyed this in a wickedly morbid way. I agree with Jack when he said the ...

If on a winter's night a traveller by Italo Calvino and a collection of short stories by Raymond Carver called Cathedral . And so the summer reading begins. :)

Omigosh, me! I was actually just thinking of starting a topic like this. I'm OrdinaryMachine, and I'm adding ya! :)

I'm left-handed. And I'm a fencer. Fear me. ;)

Wow, those are some reviews! Thank you thank you thank you to everyone who looked at this. Clau : The lack of capitalization on my part is just a matter ...