Skye

Happy Birthday! :D (shush... it's not the least bit belated...)

Hah, that's great! My favorite MADE was the one where the jock wanted to be a ballet dancer. So cute. :P

I listened to the whole playlist while I was washing the floors today. Excellent stuff! :D

Plays, cool! I've always wanted to write a play myself... It would be great if you could post your stuff up, maybe even write a "tips" article or two. If ...

I really enjoyed reading this. It was beautifully touching and tangible as well. I think I recognized some dark/watery images from a poem of Clau's? To the edge, getting somewhere ...

On the Road by Jack Kerouac (again)

I don't mean any offense here, but this poem is a train wreck. Roughly 3/4 fourths of your lines are repeated over and over. Repetition is a poetic device, but ...

The poem here seems to be all in the title. Don't get me wrong, the title itself it fantastic, it's the reason I read this poem. But the actual poem ...

I will definitely be linking to this in my critiques, both here and on TW. Thank you!

Thank you all, especially Isis -- your insight is quite honestly invaluable. I'll be sure to work through this a bit more, especially the line-breaks you mentioned.

REMOVED. Thank you for all the comments.

ZOMG Sam, happiest of Happy Birthdays! :D Speaking of quotes, you need to write a new amusing blog to make me happy. *admonishes*

I loved the second one was focused more on the patterns in the water, while number five was all about those super-cool clouds. Those two stood out to me as ...

Ari: Pearls in one picture and a Blues Brothers t-shirt in the next? I think you're my kind of girl! ;) Muse: Haha, the background in the spinning pic looks ...

So I've been dabbling in photography lately (honestly, Fabien's gorgeous photographs inspired me!), and I decided to post a couple up here for crits, as I am largely a newcomer ...