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Okay, I was a little lost but it probably was because I've never read this book.... - Don't use I, our, you/your, ect. I don't know if your teacher is ...

because it's the reason for the universe. Why is school boring?

I don't know what you'd call this, but it's a short piece based off of the music video and song called Monster by The Meg & Dia Band. Here's the ...

Ain't that the truth. I don't know maybe I'll try prose instead when I edit it again. As they say you have to know the rules before you can break ...

Urg! Now I know why I'm not a poet. I like to say what I mean and mean what I say, nothing symbolic. If I wanted that I would be ...

Just letting everyone know that I updated it. So is it any better?

I kinda agree, I kinda don't. Character charts are good to keep organized but bad for the reasons mentioned above. I don't use them because my characters change too much ...

How can I write a scene of my character walking through plain or repetive places (like a hallway, a field or a desert) for long amounts of time? She's on ...

I'm guessing a sci-fi or at least something about computers... it makes you think. Maybe something to do with stars and computers? I'd read the back. ---- (possible title for ...

Eimear - Yeah, your on the right track... not so much exams but school in general. I have more poems on my blog. They are not that great... but yeah ...

Vernon - Thanks. I'm not much of a poet really so I'm not too surprised. It just came to me and I wanted to see what other's thought of it. ...

I wrote this on my birthday, about my birthday, which happens to be on a Thursday this year. That is all that I'm going to say. (New Version) I am ...

Alainna - Thanks! I like Cotton Candy, Bubble Gum and Turtle Tracks (with vanilla ice cream not chocolate). I don't have any pets right now but I would like to ...

The Good: - It's an interesting idea to say the least. Very captivating. It kept my interest enough where I want to read more and find out what the envolupes ...

Very good. Especially since your a first time writer. I really just have two things to say: 1.) Your actual writing 'voice' is good -- you'd make a great writer ...