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Yeah This has been bugging me for a while... and I'm sorry in advance if this get's a little rant-y. I've just really want a title. You can skip though ...

Times done NaNoWriMo : .2 years '08 NaNo Name : ShotgunFreedom Genre : Fantasy/Adventure Plot Idea : Twin girls explore the forbidden woods behind there house, only one returns. Three ...

Update: YAY! I've got conflict, hence a plot! It's a lame plot but a plot is a plot... there's so much going on while the MC is getting from point ...

Yeah I need help coming up with a title for my NaNo... this is very frustrating for me because I have at least an idea for everything else... I just ...

I've attempted Nano for the past two years... I'd have a plan and everything but then November first would come around and I'd start but then I'd go to Convention ...

"If you have to sit there and rewrite it again and again, don't do it." Since when is it bad to rewrite? I don't agree with most of them, but ...

Hehe. This made me giggle... Ditto. =] All the advice I have is to describe the fireworks. What do they look like? Do they give off a certain smell? You ...

THANK YOU, EVERYONE! JFW1415 - Thanks.. Really what I ment when I said "something for everyone" using The Princess Bride as an example is that it has pretty much everything: ...

CLICHE'S - I'm looking for popular cliche's for a realistic fiction story I'm writing... I normally write fanstasy so I'm not that familiar with realistic fiction cliches. SOMETHING FOR EVERYONE ...

I'm not the greatest at grammar so... What I liked: - How you intertwined the feeling of inspiration with your surroundings. (you were camping weren't you? ;)) - Inspiration is ...

I like the idea, but the wording could use a little work (but I don't get imagery so it might just do as well to stay like it is). Anyways ...

Mark - I agree it is too simple. I really just needed something to tell Elodie: "This is what's going on, and this is what your going to do... no ...

VSN - This isn't the nursery rhyme, it's a letter, the nursery rhyme is something else which relates to this but at the same time doesn't. =/ I'll work on ...

Holly - Thanks... I probably should have added a little summary... but then again the main character reads it and is like "uh? How did my name end up in ...

All I have to say is this is written to my main character from her mother. I'm not a poet but this is for my story and is needed... along ...