Skell

hey matt, so you joined YWS. well at least now you can comment on my writing, ha not sure if thats a good thing. Welcome to the site and good ...

and the great writing continues. I love your work. if you write this book to the end i really think you could get it published. But be sure not to ...

WOW, I just read the story from chapter one to twelve. That is a great piece of writing, you have written it to perfection, apart from the mistakes that Myth ...

My grammer is not the best, but i have tried to find most mistakes. please read and enjoy. Dont hesitate to post a comment. If you have a comment on ...

Hey thanks for the advice, yeah i know what you mean about the names i will be changing James when i think of another name for him, but John i ...

I have changed the beginning a bit and written several more pages. I have eddited it a bit but my grammer isnt the best so if you see any mistakes ...

This is my first draft so any comments would be helpful before i get to far into the story. “Surrender” his magically enhanced voice was heard by all. John stood ...

When im looknig for a new book the first ones i look for are ones from authors i know. Then i start to look for new authors. so i thought ...

This is one of my earlier storys, i only ended up writing 30 pages before another idea for a novel hit me and i started writing that instead. This is ...

I thought the dialog was very well writen, giving the characters personality and setting them apart. Having a description of what they looked like and the settings they were in ...

I cannot help but get ahead of myself when writing. i usually know whats going to happen for the next 20 or 30 pages. but then i start writing and ...

hey, just joined. thought i would say hello to everyone. up until now i have shown as few people my writing as possible. Only a few friends and none of ...