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I loved it, i was at a loss for words, i thougth it was brilliant. I have nothing to add to what any of the other people have said, any ...

I am posting this again with a little extra added on. From now on i will just add to this posting all teh new parts of the story. please read ...

I love your writing. I dont have any comments to make about grammer or corrections or anyhting, Myth does a good job of going through it. But really it is ...

awww you still havent posted anymore of the story. its been ages, *shakes* see withdrawal symptoms. You are a good author and i want to read mroe of it. please ...

I think your basic story line is great, there are some parts i think you breezed through and should of elaborated on, but mostly ti all holds together well, you ...

Go the Monkey!!!!!

Will you guys stop about how its spelt. the links are good, thats all that matters. I am sure that a few of you have had trouble trying to describe ...

It was good Lan, well layed out, made it easier to read. the story line looks good, you give the readers enough so that they will want to read more ...

NOT COOL AUTHOR, YOU LEFT ME OUT, I MEAN WHAT THE HELL, I WAS IN THE CHAT ROOM WITH NUTTY AND MATT FROM THE START, BEFORE YOU EVEN CAME ALONE. ...

“John how could you?” asked Amelia. “I wish I could explain it to you, Amelia.” “John, we don’t have time, we must go now before they find us,” said Vasilia, ...

This is the Story of John Vasilius Draconius. “Surrender!” his magically enhanced voice was heard by all. A dark figure stood facing the front gates of Alu’en, the fortress of ...

its looks good, except for a few things. *I had worried. I had fretted, lost sleep, worried helplessly * worried is used twice. *But that seems to have only fed ...

I decided ot rewrite ym ShadowWalker. So please read and tell me what you think. This is the Story of John Vasilius Draconius. “Surrender!” The magically enhanced voice could be ...

As i already told you, brilliant, love it. I think everyone can relate to it, who doesnt have a small place in there mind that is there own. Where nothing ...

hey i am not very good at commenting on peoples work, but here goes. You tell too much, you should let the reader see it for themselves. example. "The heap ...