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why dont i ever see you write any fiction, not that your poetry is bad, i just think with your talent you could write a Great story.

I liked it but i had trouble understanding what your main point was, I only read it once since its late but it didn't click for me sorry, :(

.....that was, well i actaully read the whole thing with no skimming which says alot since i almost never read the whole thing when its that long and its poetry, ...

Its not bad, i find that some of the starts to my favorite stories, start off as a quick thing i wrote while i was bored, and then it grows.

its not bad, but as some of the others said it seems to be lacking something, could just be me though. but its seems a little, done, it needs something ...

hey cool piece, but then again you wrote it, lol. I really did like it, the start was great, hope you write and post more.

I know some people didnt like your poetry, but i also dont think you should stop writing because of it. You should come back on the site and write more, ...

:O i wish i could draw, and i defiantly thought the first drawing was a little bare but the others looked great, at least to you post stuff on deviantart(sp?)?

Well first off i am not very good at commenting on anything, let alone poetry, but its defiantly interesting. hmm well as i read through all the other comments i ...

As i have said a few times before, i love your writing, i have been busy so have missed a bit but i will hopefully get a chance to read ...

I found it really interesting and loved the idea, but some of it was a little confusing, especially about who was talking at times and what exactly was happening, but ...

First off i still love the characters and the story, but just one thing, the gypsies go from revengful and angry at what happened to suddenly seeing compassion ect for ...

*coughs loudly* I think a certian other user might have something to say about that last comment. No offence to syd. Anyway as you can see with matt, inanimate objects ...

This is not a story of the righteous but that of its twin. This is the Story of John Vasilius Draconius. “Surrender!” its magically enhanced voice was heard by all, ...

i like it, i dont have anything to add that others have not already said, so i will just say, it looks good, even for jsut a short piece, i ...