Skeen

got chapter 3 and 4 up of Gaurdian if you'd be willing to review it. I'd definatly appriciate it :) peace out.

Chapter 4 THE BAD NEWS Almost a month had passed since Ian had visited Audrey’s house; since then Ian had tried not to think about everything he had been told, ...

Chapter 3 The Dinner Party The next day Ian awoke around noon as usual, he pulled himself out of bed, and got ready for the day by going about his ...

yah, about the name... Its Ian, however it used to be William unitl I recently decided to change it. When I did i had to go through 80 pages and ...

I'm going to put up the six chapters i've written already. Please dont feel the need to review the whole thing, just take a look at any part and say ...

Chapter 2 DREAMS TOO REAL Summer had once again arrived in the town of Ashford, the streams flowed full, and the vast amounts of crop which filled the fields grew ...

Chapter 1 THE STORM The harsh August Sun plagued the dry soil of a small town know as Ashford soaking up every last drop of moisture held within it. There ...

I know how you feel, I sometimes feel like my chapters are too short, but in the end some just turn out longer than others. My suggestion is don't think ...

Don't know what to say that already hasent been said. Your writting is 100x better than your grammar, but that's cool cuz everyone's had trouble with grammar at one point, ...

oh nevermind, you have the rest put up already I see, I'll be sure to check it out :P

I second Zankoku, I found it to be enjoyable and interesting, however I think that we got a better look at what Miss Rosette is like than anyone else in ...

Great scene visually. This little segment in particular doesent really reveal much about the characters, I want to know more about them, becuase the more I know, the more I ...

Well, you suggested that I review other works of I want my own works to be reviewed in turn, so I guess I might as well start with you :) ...

Thanks! Sorry though, went with the ninjas, so does this make us mortal enemies or something? :P If so I'll see you on the battlefield of grammar and critique.

Hey eveyone, im Justin, but you can just call me by my last name Skeen, everyone does so I've gotten used to it. I started to write when I was ...