Skay13

I really liked this alot, it's a great work and I enjoyed reading it. The only problem I could come up with is sometimes the flow threw me off. Other ...

As I read this I found myself falling in love with the way you write. It just, entrances me. I have nothing bad to say whatsoever.

Hey, I really liked this. You don't find many works like this. You showed lots of raw emotion, which I love. Maybe you could have used the word 'and' to ...

I sweep the peice of auburn hair away from my eyes, looking into the night while the night looked back. A car engine cuts off and I feel you, I ...